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Pagan dancing circles
& the ultraviolence
perspirating the air
sifts chalk into
the crack between us.
You left the city’s crazy
& returned hungry—
spreading the white wood’s
black days
w/ my infection of rage.
You laid me down
in fake diamonds
& lying pearls—
your old vices
stripping me into a
violent field
of bone houses.
I can hear the bruises
& the cut above your
eyebrow speaking—
my goosebumps
punching you thru
& the song battery sings
ends & begins in
minor chords.
There is a choir
of me
vibrating in symbolistic
blurs in each of your
eyelashes—
each of us spanning
wider than Columbus’
bus of misfitted lips
& our opacity varies
w/ every tear you fall.
My teeth are rakes
w/ sharpened spikes
to paint portraits
on your chest—
stippling in my sainted
image.
The cherry colored midnight
I stuff you with
leaks out & fishes for
the affection of your
mistress birds—
too busy pouring honey
in the door carved
into your side.
I’m a pretty-bad girl
& all your done decisions
feed the metal string—
moving to etch & poke
the eden rib bone
cautious to the wind.
Remember the greatest
hits hurt deeper
than sensibility—
I’m sad in the city
w/ a bottle of
shifting bourbon
soaking me thru,
swimming in a bathtub
of black branches
& electrocuted loss.
& the ultraviolence
perspirating the air
sifts chalk into
the crack between us.
You left the city’s crazy
& returned hungry—
spreading the white wood’s
black days
w/ my infection of rage.
You laid me down
in fake diamonds
& lying pearls—
your old vices
stripping me into a
violent field
of bone houses.
I can hear the bruises
& the cut above your
eyebrow speaking—
my goosebumps
punching you thru
& the song battery sings
ends & begins in
minor chords.
There is a choir
of me
vibrating in symbolistic
blurs in each of your
eyelashes—
each of us spanning
wider than Columbus’
bus of misfitted lips
& our opacity varies
w/ every tear you fall.
My teeth are rakes
w/ sharpened spikes
to paint portraits
on your chest—
stippling in my sainted
image.
The cherry colored midnight
I stuff you with
leaks out & fishes for
the affection of your
mistress birds—
too busy pouring honey
in the door carved
into your side.
I’m a pretty-bad girl
& all your done decisions
feed the metal string—
moving to etch & poke
the eden rib bone
cautious to the wind.
Remember the greatest
hits hurt deeper
than sensibility—
I’m sad in the city
w/ a bottle of
shifting bourbon
soaking me thru,
swimming in a bathtub
of black branches
& electrocuted loss.
Literature
Everything I Can Never Say
I open my mouth to tell you;
close it.
Open. Close. Open. Close.
I'm faced with a challenging problem,
can't even begin to tell you--
And I know, baby, that I can tell you anything--
something that cannot be said
in three words?
I struggle with this everyday;
Telling you my heart is afloat,
in boats, on oceans, through turbulent storms
(Not really, but the feeling is indescribable).
You see,
I feel like I've known you for years;
being with you is like coming home.
The feeling of slipping my fingers into yours
Isn't anything new.
no- it's a rejoining of self;
My soul finding it's mate, in
Literature
love your mistakes
I've fumbled around with hearts before,
and let them fall. Cracked fingernails, walked into
doorframes, bumped into people and hesitated too long
to open my mouth. Moments passed me by, often.
Occasionally, I was brave, and fell hard on my nose.
Was bleeding and embarrassed for the pain;
and the proof of it, the blood.
Said "sorry, but," or didn't say sorry at all, ate my feelings
or starved myself for them, carried my guilt around with me
until it made me sick and lose my appetite,
drowned my hand soap in the toilet,
didn't stretch after exercise and was sore for days,
kept my distance to those reaching out to me.
Pushed my pain asid
Literature
You say you love me
You say you love to hear me ramble, yet you always cut me off.
You say you want a future with me, yet you see no future for yourself.
You say you love to make me smile, yet you always make me cry.
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS
this is one of the first poems
i've written in a long time
that isn't personal.
i was listening to Lana Del Rey's
new album Ultraviolence
& it spoke to me in the worst way.
i'm not sure if i accomplished
what i was going for here--
if the theme and plot came across.
the idea is that the man left
the girl in the city who he'd been treating bad
& thought, in the woods, that she was torturing him
because of it but it was
in his imagination the entire time.
please help.
this is one of the first poems
i've written in a long time
that isn't personal.
i was listening to Lana Del Rey's
new album Ultraviolence
& it spoke to me in the worst way.
i'm not sure if i accomplished
what i was going for here--
if the theme and plot came across.
the idea is that the man left
the girl in the city who he'd been treating bad
& thought, in the woods, that she was torturing him
because of it but it was
in his imagination the entire time.
please help.
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Change nothing. Hah, how helpful is that?
But seriously. I love this. Except maybe the capitals. I don't really like those. I'm not sure why, though. They just feel...formal.
Change nothing. Hah, how helpful is that?
But seriously. I love this. Except maybe the capitals. I don't really like those. I'm not sure why, though. They just feel...formal.